Discussion about this post

User's avatar
Dale Mahfood's avatar

Hey Neena, I absolutely love this piece! And not just because you mention my book in it. Lol! (Thanks for that.) I could see this piece turned into a beautiful short story that you could enter into the Commonwealth Short Story Prize, which will open up for submissions again next October. If you’re so inclined, I encourage you to do so.

I was surprised to see the word “coolIe,” as it’s a word we use in Jamaica as well. That shouldn’t have surprise me, though, since Jamaica and Guyana have a strong connection.

Expand full comment
Jack Krown's avatar

“...people are cruel to the horse.”

The child grabs it.

I want to meet this kid.

Expand full comment
9 more comments...

No posts